Homework for 31. Mar.
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As I think foreign language and big data analysis skills are very important in the future workplace. These days, all companies cannot work only in their own country. So must be learning foreign languages. And global hot issues is AI flat form. This AI is basis on big data. If I have a skill for analysis of big data, then I’ll get a big chance for expending the sales.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Leo!
I completely agree! Foreign language skills are essential for working in a globalized world, and big data analysis is becoming more important as AI technology advances. I think critical thinking and adaptability will also be crucial. As industries evolve rapidly, being able to analyze situations and adjust quickly will give us a competitive edge.
- Kristine ^^
As I think foreign language and big data analysis skills are very important in the future workplace.
>> I believe that foreign language proficiency and big data analysis skills will be crucial in the future workplace.
These days, all companies cannot work only in their own country.
>> These days, companies cannot operate only within their own country.
So must be learning foreign languages. And global hot issues is AI flat form.
>> Therefore, learning foreign languages is essential and one of the major global trends today is AI platforms.
This AI is basis on big data.
>> This AI is based on big data.
If I have a skill for analysis of big data, then I’ll get a big chance for expending the sales.
>> Having data analysis skills will give me a great opportunity to boost my sales.
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