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2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hello there Debby :) You're right. I should have studied every day. I think it's certain that I'm getting lazy these days. You know... it's a vacation, so my body always feel that want to take a break for a whole day 'although I'm not tired'!! I guess. hahahaha This is just excuses. I'm sorry... :'( Take care :D <Essay> It's my dad. He always help me when I need some help. He teach me how to live in reality. He is a teacher of life. Sometimes I don't like him because he is an inflexible person, so I need to be patient to pass a problem away. However I hope he is with me forever.

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Hi there [이름]!^^ Parents are treasures!^^ We must try our best to keep them with us since we feel safe with them. I think that the bond between father and son is amazing since they can understand each other better than anybody else. Same with a mother and a daughter relationship. You deserve to enjoy your vacation but since you feel guilty about getting lazy that means that English and studying English is very important for you. hahahahahaha^^ It\'s fine with me as long as you end up in front of your computer everyday to have class with me! Take care!^^ t.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hello there Debby :) >> CORRECT Or> Hello Debby^^You\'re right. >> CORRECT OR> You bet! I should have studied every day. >> CORRECT OR> My studies should have been done everyday. I think it\'s certain that I\'m getting lazy these days. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m surely getting relaxed this days. You know... it\'s a vacation, so my body always feel that want to take a break for a whole day \'although I\'m not tired\'!! >> You know... it\'s the vacation, so my body always feels that I want to take a break for the whole day \'although I\'m not tired\'!! I guess. hahahaha>> CORRECT OR> It\'s what I think.hahahahaThis is just excuses. I\'m sorry... :\'( >> This are just excuses. I\'m sorry... :\'(Take care :D >> CORRECT OR> Take lots of care^^<Essay>It\'s my dad. He always help me when I need some help. >> It\'s my dad. He always helps me when I need some help.  He teach me how to live in reality. >> He teaches me how to live in reality. He is a teacher of life. >> He is my teacher in my life. Sometimes I don\'t like him because he is an inflexible person, so I need to be patient to pass a problem away. >> CORRECT OR> Sometimes he is difficult to reason out with so I need a lot of patience. However I hope he is with me forever. >> CORRECT OR> Yet, I wish that I am with him forever.  

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