Homework for 7/29
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello there Debby :)
You're right. I should have studied every day. I think it's certain that I'm getting lazy these days. You know... it's a vacation, so my body always feel that want to take a break for a whole day 'although I'm not tired'!! I guess. hahahaha
This is just excuses. I'm sorry... :'(
Take care :D
<Essay>
It's my dad. He always help me when I need some help. He teach me how to live in reality. He is a teacher of life. Sometimes I don't like him because he is an inflexible person, so I need to be patient to pass a problem away. However I hope he is with me forever.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
Parents are treasures!^^
We must try our best to keep them with us since we feel safe with them.
I think that the bond between father and son is amazing since they can understand each
other better than anybody else. Same with a mother and a daughter relationship.
You deserve to enjoy your vacation but since you feel guilty about getting lazy that means that
English and studying English is very important for you. hahahahahaha^^
It\'s fine with me as long as you end up in front of your computer everyday to have class with me!
Take care!^^
t.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hello there Debby :)
>> CORRECT
Or> Hello Debby^^You\'re right.
>> CORRECT
OR> You bet!
I should have studied every day.
>> CORRECT
OR> My studies should have been done everyday.
I think it\'s certain that I\'m getting lazy these days.
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'m surely getting relaxed this days.
You know... it\'s a vacation, so my body always feel that want to take a break for a whole day \'although I\'m not tired\'!!
>> You know... it\'s the vacation, so my body always feels that I want to take a break for the whole day \'although I\'m not tired\'!!
I guess. hahahaha>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s what I think.hahahahaThis is just excuses. I\'m sorry... :\'(
>> This are just excuses. I\'m sorry... :\'(Take care :D
>> CORRECT
OR> Take lots of care^^<Essay>It\'s my dad. He always help me when I need some help.
>> It\'s my dad. He always helps me when I need some help.
He teach me how to live in reality.
>> He teaches me how to live in reality.
He is a teacher of life.
>> He is my teacher in my life.
Sometimes I don\'t like him because he is an inflexible person, so I need to be patient to pass a problem away.
>> CORRECT
OR> Sometimes he is difficult to reason out with so I need a lot of patience.
However I hope he is with me forever.
>> CORRECT
OR> Yet, I wish that I am with him forever.
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