homework for Esabelle:(1)write about your day.4sentences long.(2)write an essay about what gravity d
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it is chrismas and my birthday
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Hello there Rosie!
Thank you for answering my homework and for giving me homework in return!
1.Write about your day. 4 sentences long.
I had a great day today since I was able to talk to my students and I was able to make them happy in class.
I was also glad to hear that my students had a great holiday and that they were able to give and receive some presents.
Although my time was not that long, I am happy since I was able to watch the series \"Hotel De Luna\" today.
I think it was a good day and I hope my students also had a great day.
2.write an essay about what gravity is
Gravity is a natural force which brings two things with mass and energy such as planets, and other objects together.
It is what makes things on Earth fall to the ground. Gravity various on the size of the objects and the gravitational pull or forces.
The larger the object, the stronger the gravitational pull. It is the reason why we are able to walk on the Earth. The moon has a lesser gravitational force which is why things and people can float on the moon.
Have a nice day ~
it is chrismas and my birthday
>>It is Christmas and my birthday.
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