Homework for friday -2

2012-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

8. __How big i__the new TV you bought?" How big is How big it is It is big Is it big 9. Bill was just going to bed when his wife __had come home__ from work. is going is coming home had come home came home 10. I should __have brought__ my books to school yesterday. brought had brought to bring have brought Wow I thought that tense was easy for me but it's not. I anticipate that fault answers would be more than 5. It was really confusing. Maybe I should have a modest attitude in grammar. Anyway I got slump at last weekend. I just slept all day long and didn't do anything. And I still have a headache now... But I got a good news. I'll go to the bank today to pay a tuition for my university. And I don't need to pay even one dollar. Because I got a full scholorship. My dad bought me an expensive dinner because of that. Anyway, I should get my mind back and restart my working. See you in class~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi again [이름]!I really thank you for being open to me all the time! You make me so proud of you all the time. Even if you didn\'t have a perfect score in your homework, I still believe in your capability. I\'m pretty sure that in no time, you\'ll do much better in English because of the perseverance and enthusiasm you show to learn. Anyway, it\'s really a good news! Keep up the good work and congratulations for having a full scholarship! I know that you can maintain it, just always have confidence! See you later and keep safe! ~~ T. Sheela ~~ 8. __How big i__the new TV you bought?\"How big isHow big it isIt is bigIs it big>> HOW BIG IS the new TV you bought?9. Bill was just going to bed when his wife __had come home__ from work.is goingis coming homehad come homecame home>> Bill was just going to bed when his wife CAME HOME from work.10. I should __have brought__ my books to school yesterday.broughthad broughtto bringhave brought >> Correct!Wow I thought that tense was easy for me but it\'s not. >> Wow, I thought that verb tense was easy for but it\'s not. >> Wow! I thought that verb tense was easy for me but I\'m wrong. I anticipate that fault answers would be more than 5. >> I anticipate that I would have more than 5 wrong answers this time. >> I think that I would have more than 5 mistakes this time. It was really confusing. >> It is really confusing. Maybe I should have a modest attitude in grammar. >> Correct! Anyway I got slump at last weekend. >> Anyway, I slumped last weekend. I just slept all day long and didn\'t do anything. >> Correct! And I still have a headache now... >> Correct! But I got a good news. >> Correct! I\'ll go to the bank today to pay a tuition for my university. >> I went to the bank today to pay for my tuition fee in the University. OR>> I went to the bank to have money for my payment in my tuition fee at the University. And I don\'t need to pay even one dollar. >> Correct! OR>> But great that I didn\'t need to pay even just one dollar. Because I got a full scholorship. >> Correct! My dad bought me an expensive dinner because of that. >> Correct! Anyway, I should get my mind back and restart my working. >> Anyway, I should get my mind back and restart working. See you in class~~~ >> Correct! OR>> See you in class! (You must use a punctuation mark at the end of your sentence)

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