Homework for friday

Hi Karen! Thanks for teaching me today. My english is still not good but I'm gonna practice during this weekend. The question is : "What is your favorite English word and why?" and I could say my favorite English word is trip because it reminds me of a memory about trip to Japan with my family. My father have worked in Japan since I was 4,so we haven't had a chane to get together a lot. But When I was in middle school, My family went to Tokyo where my father worked and we could have a happy dinner. As a result I like the word trip. Anyway I have a little question.Whenever I do a homework, I always make the blank spaces to help you see my sentences more clearly but after I click "확인" ,these sentences combined tightly together so it's little uncomfortable .Would it be any way to make a blank space ? Hope your response and Have a nice weekend with your mom!

Hi there Sang Hwa! 

Thanks again for making your composition. I was able to take a peek into your childhood. I love the word \"Travel\" as well, because it carries with it countless stories and endless possibilities. ^^ I hope that we\'ll both have enough time (and money kkkk) to travel in the future. As for your concern regarding your composition, I raised this problem to my Korean Managers, they\'ll be helping you with it. ^^ So please don\'t stop making your compositions because I always enjoy reading them. Thanks for your message! You too, enjoy your \"date\" with your sister! kkkk Have a safe weekend and talk to you again soon!  ~t.Karen (>.^___^<)

Hi Karen!

>> Correct! ^^

Thanks for teaching me today.

>> Correct! ^^ 

My english is still not good but I\'m gonna practice during this weekend.

>> Correct grammar! ^^ But please capitalize the first letter of \"English\" because it is a proper noun. Examples:

a. Korean

b. French 

c. Mandarin 

The question is : \"What is your favorite English word and why?\" and I could say my favorite English word is trip because it reminds me of a memory about trip to Japan with my family.

>>The question is: \"What is your favorite English word and why\" and I could say my favorite English word is \"Trip\" because it reminds me of a trip I had with my family in Japan. 

My father have worked in Japan since I was 4,so we haven\'t had a chane to get together a lot.

>> My father has been working in Japan since I was 4, so we haven\'t had the chance to get together a lot.

>> ** Be careful with our spelling: \"Chance\".

>> ** When you use the past tense \"Has worked\", it means he used to work there but not anymore. Therefore it is better to say \"Has been working\" (present perfect continuous tense) to talk about an action in the past that is still continuing until now. 

But When I was in middle school, My family went to Tokyo where my father worked and we could have a happy dinner.

>> But when I was in middle school, my family went to Tokyo where my father was working and we were able to have happy dinners. 

>> ** Do not capitalize the first letter of the words \"When\" and \"My\" because they are not proper nouns. You will only capitalize the first letter a word if:

1.It is the first word in a sentence. 

2. It is a proper noun. 

3. It is the pronoun \"I\". 

As a result I like the word trip.

>> As a result, I like the word \"Trip\".

>> ** Don\'t forget your punctuation marks, comma [ , ] and quotation marks [ \"  \" ]. 

Anyway I have a little question.

>> Anyway, I have a small question. 

>> ** The expression is usually: \"Tiny question\" or \"Small question\".

Whenever I do a homework, I always make the blank spaces to help you see my sentences more clearly but after I click \"확인\" ,these sentences combined tightly together so it\'s little uncomfortable .

>> Whenever I do my homework, I always make blank spaces to help you see my sentences more clearly, but after I click  \"확인\", these sentences gets compressed together, so it looks a bit awkward. 

>> ** Since you are talking about more than one \"blank spaces\", remove the article \"The\".

>> ** \"Compressed\" is a better word to fit your sentence. When you say \"Combine\" it may mean \"mixed\". 

Would it be any way to make a blank space ?

>> Is there any way to make a blank space? 

Hope your response and Have a nice weekend with your mom!

>> I am hoping to read your response and have nice weekend with your mom! 

>> ** You need complete your sentence\'s thought. Add \"I\" to serve as the subject in your sentence. 

>> ** Do not capitalize the first letter of the word \"Have\" because it is not a proper noun. You will only capitalize the first letter a word if:

1.It is the first word in a sentence. 

2. It is a proper noun. 

3. It is the pronoun \"I\".