Homework for friday

2012-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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Choose an english song and explain why you have choosen that song. Use atleast 200 words to explain or elaborate your answer. Frankly speaking, when I heard this song, I thought it was just a good song and just had a good melody. I didn't care about the meaning of the lyrics. But as I thought about this song deeply to work this homework, It did doing things to me. The lyrics was very touchy and meaningful, and when it is united with melody, it really moved my heart. The song's title is 'In the arms of an angel' by Sarah Mclachian. This song is to the people who have hardship in life and feel deep frustration to live on. It shows us however hard your life may be, there are an angel you can depend on and rest in. I think an angel can be a bestfriend, wife or their children. The song says "In the arms of an angel far away from here ~(omit)~ may you find some comefort here". somebody would think that it is a heaven or suicide or escape from the reality. (to be continued...)

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[이름], I think \"Lips of an angel\", is relly a wonderful song. I actually love this song because of the lyrics. The good thing about listening to music are mysteries behind each song that you can only find out when you do a research. I would like to share a song in our class which was controversial because of the story behind it. T.Sheela Choose an english song and explain why you have choosen that song. Use atleast 200 words to explain or elaborate your answer.Frankly speaking, when I heard this song, I thought it was just a good song and just had a good melody. >> Frankly speaking, when I heard this song, I thought it is just a good song and has a good melody. I didn\'t care about the meaning of the lyrics. >>Correct! OR>> I didn\'t care about the lyrics. But as I thought about this song deeply to work this homework, It did doing things to me. >> But as I thought about this song deeply to be able to do this homework, it did some things to me. The lyrics was very touchy and meaningful, and when it is united with melody, it really moved my heart. >> Correct! >>The lyrics was very emotional and meaningful, and when it is being sang with melody, it really moves my heart. The song\'s title is \'In the arms of an angel\' by Sarah Mclachian. >> Correct! This song is to the people who have hardship in life and feel deep frustration to live on. >> This song is about people who are having a hardship in life and feel a deep frustration to live on. It shows us however hard your life may be, there are an angel you can depend on and rest in. >> However, it shows us how hard life may be, there are angels you can depend on and rest in. I think an angel can be a bestfriend, wife or their children. >> Correct! >>I think an angel could be their bestfriend, wife, husband or their children. The song says \"In the arms of an angel far away from here ~(omit)~ may you find some comfort here\". >> Correct! somebody would think that it is a heaven or suicide or escape from the reality. >> Someone would think that it is the heaven or suicide or escape from the reality. >>OR Someone would think that this lyrics mean is to go to heaven, to commit suicide or to escape the reality. (to be continued...) >>Correct!

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