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2012-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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But I think it differently. 'Far away from here' means you can rely on somebody(angel) even if there are unendurable difficulties in life. And it stands for you could be free from those hardships. It doesn't mean you are far away from here spatially. I hit upon my father this time. He is a professor. When he first became a professor there were enemies in the university. They were his colleague professors. They harrassed my father for ten years. He said he felt frustration at that time. But he put up with it. He always thought about his children. Me and my brother. We were an angel to him. As the song says, when he was at home, He was far from the dark, cold hotel room, and found comfort in home. No one wouldn't endure it unless there were their lighthouse(angel). He finally won that game and now it is a comfortable job, and there are no enemies. Anyone should have their angel. If they have, they could get through any hardship they would meet with.

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[이름], Wow! I can\'t express how lucky I am to read this story about your family. I am motivated to be much stronger because of you. Thank you very much for sharing this to me. I think until now you are the inspiration of your parents. My son is also my inspiration to work hard and be strong. See you later. Please remind me about the song I wanted to share. ( I easily forget things.) T.Sheela But I think it differently. >>Correct!OR>> But I think to it differently. \'Far away from here\' means you can rely on somebody(angel) even if there are unendurable difficulties in life. >> Correct! And it stands for you could be free from those hardships. >> And it will stand for you so you could be free from those hardships. It doesn\'t mean you are far away from here spatially. >> Corrrect! >>OR It doesn\'t mean that you have to be far away from here spatially. I hit upon my father this time. >> It hits my father this time. He is a professor. >>Correct! When he first became a professor there were enemies in the university. >> Correct! >>OR When he first became a professor, he had some enemies in the university. They were his colleague professors. >>They were his colleagues. >>They were his fellow professors. They harrassed my father for ten years. >> Correct! He said he felt frustration at that time. >> He said he felt frustrated at that time. But he put up with it. >>Correct! He always thought about his children. >>Correct! Me and my brother. >>Correct! We were an angel to him. >>We are his angels. >>We are angels to him. As the song says, when he was at home, He was far from the dark, cold hotel room, and found comfort in home. >> Correct! No one wouldn\'t endure it unless there were their lighthouse(angel). >> Correct! He finally won that game and now it is a comfortable job, and there are no enemies. >>Correct!Anyone should have their angel. >> Correct! If they have, they could get through any hardship they would meet with. >> If they have, they could get through any hardships they would meet with.

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