homework for friday

2012-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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I think you probably mixed up because today's homework is same as the last one. (8.20) Sometimes it happens. Haha. Don't worry. Today, I read an inspiring short story. It is about the elementary school class in America. The narrater went to the class to see what the teacher was teaching. Students were writing something. They wrote the words which started with "I can't". For example, "I can't do push-up more than ten times" was written. It was weird to her. "Why are they writing "I can't" instead of "I can"? After the students finished writing, Teacher went to the side of a playground with them and the box. In the box, There were full of papers which children wrote. And then they digged a hole. After three feet hole was made, they burried the box. And Teacher started to pray. "From now, there are no words like "I can't". At least in the world you living, you can do everything that you want." It was very touching. It gives me a lesson how I would teach my child.

강사 첨삭

[이름], I am so sorry I gave you the same homework but I think it is a blessing in disguise since I was able to read a very beautiful story from you. I love this story and I am really move with the teacher. Thank you for sharing this to me. See you later! T.Sheela I think you probably mixed up because today\'s homework is same as the last one. (8.20) >> I think you probably mixed up, because today\'s homework is the same as the last one. (8.20) Sometimes it happens. >>Correct! Haha. Don\'t worry. >>Correct!Today, I read an inspiring short story. > > Today, I have read an inspiring short story. It is about the elementary school class in America. >> Correct! The narrater went to the class to see what the teacher was teaching. >>Correct! Students were writing something. They wrote the words which started with \"I can\'t\". >>Students were writing something. They were writting a sentence that starts with \"I can\'t\". For example, \"I can\'t do push-up more than ten times\" was written. >> For example,there was a sentence written and it says, \"I can\'t do push-up more than ten times,\" It was weird to her. >> It was weird for her. \"Why are they writing \"I can\'t\" instead of \"I can\"? >>Correct!After the students finished writing, Teacher went to the side of a playground with them and the box. >> After the students finished writing, the Teacher went to the side of the playground with them and the box. >> After the students finished writing, the Teacher went to the side of the playground with the students and the box. In the box, There were full of papers which children wrote. >>Correct! >>OR The box was full of papers which the children wrote. And then they digged a hole. >>Correct! After three feet hole was made, they burried the box. >> Correct! >> Or When they\'ve reach a three feet hole, they burried the box. And Teacher started to pray. >> And the teacher started to pray. \"From now, there are no words like \"I can\'t\". >> \"From now on, there are no words like \"I can\'t\". At least in the world you living, you can do everything that you want.\" >> At least in the world you are living, you can do everything that you want.\" It was very touching. >> Correct! It gives me a lesson how I would teach my child. >>It gives me a lesson on how I would teach my child.

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