Homework for Jan.7, 2024
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Doing the same things and avoiding changes make people\'s life comfortable.
However, they keep people from developing, and leave people complacent.
People who always try to be changed can improve the satisfaction of their life by various experience
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Doing the same things and avoiding changes make people\'s life comfortable.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
However, they keep people from developing, and leave people complacent.
However, they keep people from developing, and leave people complacent.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR >>> However, they keep people from [improving ], and leave people complacent.
People who always try to be changed can improve the satisfaction of their life by various experience
People who always try to be changed can improve the satisfaction of their life by various experience
>>> People who always try changes can improve the satisfaction of their lives from various experiences.
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