Homework for March 25.
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework for March 25.
Writing task: How do you resolve conflicts with friends?
In the past, I didn’t try to tell my feelings, thinking because I didn’t want to break the meeting and atmosphere. When I’m uncomfortable in the meeting, I tell my feelings to my friends after few days. I don’t want to be emotional. However, my friends don’t have the same idea. They said when I do that, I make the easy matter difficult. Feel free to say immediately.
Nowadays, my friends and me feel free to say yes or no and express our idea,opinion.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. It’s nice that you are now free to express your thoughts immediately to your friends. I agree that sometimes, when we try to keep our thoughts or feelings to ourselves, they tend to weigh heavier the longer we hold them in.
- T. Caitlyn
In the past, I didn’t try to tell my feelings, thinking because I didn’t want to break the meeting and atmosphere.
>> In the past, I didn’t try to express my feelings because I didn’t want to disrupt the meeting or the atmosphere.
When I’m uncomfortable in the meeting, I tell my feelings to my friends after few days.
>> When I’m uncomfortable in a meeting, I tell my friends how I feel a few days later.
I don’t want to be emotional.
>> CORRECT
However, my friends don’t have the same idea.
>> CORRECT
They said when I do that, I make the easy matter difficult.
>> They said that when I do that, I make simple matters more complicated.
Feel free to say immediately.
>> They told me to feel free to speak up immediately.
Nowadays, my friends and me feel free to say yes or no and express our idea,opinion.
Nowadays, my friends and me feel free to say yes or no and express our idea,opinion.
>> Nowadays, my friends and I feel free to say yes or no and to express our ideas and opinions.
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