homework for monday -2

2012-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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8) After Max __had finished__his breakfast, he left the flat. (to finish) 9) Laura repaired her glasses because her brother __had broken__them. (to break) 10) By the time the show began, all friends __had arrived__. (to arrive) I thought that like this sentence "He brushed his teech after his mother ______ at him (yell) " I could use both 'had yelled' and 'yelled'. I should see your correction in these questions. I'm a little confused about that. Anyway I want to ask a favor of you. I think I could improve my english level if you give me an essay homework. Because I concern about the Toefl test, it'll be very helpful to my writing skills. I promise that I would do every homework. See you in class~~~

강사 첨삭

Hello there! :) I will gladly take note of your suggestion. I will do my best as well to help you out with whatever you need to improve. Now regarding your question, remind me to explain that to you in class later. :) It\'s much better that way so I could give you more examples as well. Take care and talk to you later! T. Sheela 8) After Max __had finished__his breakfast, he left the flat. (to finish) >>Correct! 9) Laura repaired her glasses because her brother __had broken__them. (to break) >>Correct!10) By the time the show began, all friends __had arrived__. (to arrive)>>Correct!I thought that like this sentence \"He brushed his teech after his mother ______ at him (yell) \" I could use both \'had yelled\' and \'yelled\'. >>I thought that in the sentence \"He brushed his teech after his mother ______ at him (yell) \" I could use both \'had yelled\' and \'yelled\'. I should see your correction in these questions. >>Correct! I\'m a little confused about that. >>Correct!Anyway I want to ask a favor of you. >>Anyway, I want to ask a favor from you.  I think I could improve my english level if you give me an essay homework. >>I think I could improve my English level if you would give me an essay homework. Because I concern about the Toefl test, it\'ll be very helpful to my writing skills. >>Because I\'m concerned about the TOEFL test. It\'ll be very helpful to my writing skills.  I promise that I would do every homework. >>Correct!See you in class~~~ >>Correct!

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