Homework For The Autumn

2018-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Do you like the autumn season? Yes, I like the autumn season. What are other answers to this question? 2. What is good about autumn? Cool wind is good about autumn. What are other answers to this question?

강사 첨삭

Good day [이름]!

Happy Tuesday again.

Thank you for your active participation in class.
I really appreciate it especially when you do chants.

I hope that you are having fun as well.
Please go over the corrections on your page.

Have a nice day.


Love,
Teacher Nina


1. Do you like the autumn season?

Yes, I like the autumn season.
>> CORRECT

What are other answers to this question?

>> My favorite season is Autumn.

2. What is good about autumn?

Cool wind is good about autumn.

>> Better: The cool wind is good about Autumn season. 

What are other answers to this question?

>> Experiencing the cool wind during Autumn season is the best.

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