Homework For The Birthday

2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I studied and I talked to teacher Nina about Markings will go to Bonobono. We also practiced some words and ended our class. OK. Now, Answer the following questions. 3. What do you like and dislike about celebrating birthdays? I like go to the restoraunt. What are other answers to this question? 4. How do you want to celebrate your birthday next year? I want to eating a cake. What are other answers to this question?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you so much for your precious time today.
I appreciate it a lot.
Please go over the corrections below.
I am sure that you will eat a delicious cake next year.

See you and take care.

Teacher Nina


I studied and I talked to teacher Nina about Markings will go to Bonobono.

>> I studied and I talked to teacher Nina about Markings that will go to Bonobono.

We also practiced some words and ended our class.
>> CORRECT
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
3. What do you like and dislike about celebrating birthdays?

I like go to the restoraunt.
>> I like celebrating birthdays in restaurants.


What are other answers to this question?
>> I love celebrating birthdays in houses or restaurants.
>> OR: I dislike celebrating birthdays because of the house chores after the party.

4. How do you want to celebrate your birthday next year?

I want to eating a cake.
>> I want to eat cake next year on my birthday. 
What are other answers to this question?

>> I want to travel on my birthday next year.

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