Homework For The Birthday
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you so much for your precious time today.
I appreciate it a lot.
Please go over the corrections below.
I am sure that you will eat a delicious cake next year.
See you and take care.
Teacher Nina
I studied and I talked to teacher Nina about Markings will go to Bonobono.
>> I studied and I talked to teacher Nina about Markings that will go to Bonobono.
We also practiced some words and ended our class.
>> CORRECT
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
3. What do you like and dislike about celebrating birthdays?
I like go to the restoraunt.
>> I like celebrating birthdays in restaurants.
What are other answers to this question?
>> I love celebrating birthdays in houses or restaurants.
>> OR: I dislike celebrating birthdays because of the house chores after the party.
4. How do you want to celebrate your birthday next year?
I want to eating a cake.
>> I want to eat cake next year on my birthday.
What are other answers to this question?
>> I want to travel on my birthday next year.
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