homework for the day:)
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Sir Charles, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. :)
I totally agree with everything you said.
It is not enough for one to dream.
Talent, effort and hard work are needed.
See ya,
T.Risa
HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY : Do you think anyone can become a celebrity?
If you ask me of the upper question, my answer is \"Sure, of course.\"
>> If you ask me of the question above, my answer is \"Sure, of course.\"
Because Everyone is the same human who can be a celebrity.
>> Because every human has the opportunity to become a celebrity.
Though my answer is \"Sure, of course.\", it is a really difficult for everyone to be a celebrity.
>> Though my answer is \"Sure, of course\", it is really difficult for everyone to be a celebrity.
IN korea, many student dream of becoming a celebrity these days.
>> In Korea, many students dream of becoming a celebrity these days.
But they have to have many previous conditions and an innate talent.
>> But they have to have a talent and undergo a lot of trainings.
For example, a person who want to be a celebrity has not only to try his best but also to make a opportunity to be a celebrity.
>> For example, a person who wants to be a celebrity should not only do his or her best but also has to look for opportunities to become a celebrity.
In addition, there is a necessary inborn talent which is good voice, good looking, and so on.
>> In addition, the aspiring person should have an innate talent, good looks, and the like.
We certainly have to know a celebrity, who had a hard time and did his best.
>> We certainly should know that to become a celebrity, one should do his or hest best and work hard.
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