homework for the day:)

2013-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Risa

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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY: Where would you like to go for an adventure � a jungle, a desert, a small island or a city? A jungle is the best place where I would really like to go. I have never been to a jungle. That is why I would really like to go there. I just have seen lions, zebras, giraffes, elephants, and so on at a long distance in the zoo, or I just watched those on TV. If I see those animals directly in a jungle, it would be a great experience to me. If I have an opportunity to visit another country, that would be an Africa. All in good time, I hope to go to an Africa with my family.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir Charles!

I would be terrified to see those wild animals.

I would be scared then be amazed. hahaha :)

Thank you for sharing your answer.

Let\'s talk more about this later.

See ya. ;)

Cheers,

T.Risa

HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:

Where would you like to go for an adventure � a jungle, a desert, a small island or a city

A jungle is the best place where I would really like to go.

>> A jungle is my best choice.

>> I would like to go to a jungle.

I have never been to a jungle.

>> Correct

That is why I would really like to go there.

>> Correct

I just have seen lions, zebras, giraffes, elephants, and so on at a long distance in the zoo, or I just watched those on TV.

>> I just have seen lions, zebras, giraffes, elephants, and the like at a long distance at the zoo, or I just have seen them on TV.

If I see those animals directly in a jungle, it would be a great experience to me.

>> If I personally see these animals in a jungle, it would be a great experience for me.

If I have an opportunity to visit another country, that would be an Africa.

>> If I have an opportunity to visit another country, that would be Africa.

All in good time, I hope to go to an Africa with my family.

>> All in good time, I hope to go to Africa with my family.

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