HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY
학생이 쓴 원문
Kindly answer the question below in a paragraph form:
If you had the opportunity to get a message across to a large group of people, what would it be?
It is "Join us!". I like making a friend. so, if I got the message, it is 'join us'.
강사 첨삭
Wow! You finished your homework very quick!
Amazing [이름]!
It is greatly appreciated.
Anyway, you should make your own mango shake and share it to me. haha
It is helpful to express your thoughts about this topic longer. It would challenge your English skills.
Nonetheless, I like your answer. It\'s like \'tomorrow morning\' hahaha
Have a goodnight my dear
See you in class
Teacher Janice
Kindly answer the question below in a paragraph form:
If you had the opportunity to get a message across to a large group of people, what would it be?
It is \"Join us!\". I like making a friend. so, if I got the message, it is \'join us\'.
If you had the opportunity to get a message across to a large group of people, what would it be?
It is \"Join us!\". I like making a friend. so, if I got the message, it is \'join us\'.
>> I would say to the public, \"Join us!\" I like making friends so if I will have the chance to say something in public, it would be \"Join us!\"
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