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2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I studied, talked to teacher Nina about color mix. We also practiced some words and ended our class. OK. Now, Answer the following questions. 5. What do you want to be when you grow up? I want to be a Mathematician? What are other answers to this question? 6. What do you want to be like that? Because my favorite subject is math. What are other answers to this question (about scientist) ?

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!

Than you so much for your time today.
I am glad that you feel better now.

I am sure that you will be a great Mathematician.

Happy New Year. I hope that you will have a great holiday with your family.

See you on February 7. Take care.

Teacher Nina


I studied, talked to teacher Nina about color mix.

>> I studied, talked to teacher Nina about mixing colors.

We also practiced some words and ended our class.
>> CORRECT
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
5. What do you want to be when you grow up?

I want to be a Mathematician?
>> CORRECT (You should put period at the end of the sentence because it is a statement). 

What are other answers to this question?
>> I want to teach Math to other people. 


6. What do you want to be like that?

Because my favorite subject is math.
>> CORRECT
What are other answers to this question (about scientist) ?

>> I want to be a Scientist because my favorite subject is Science.

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