Homework For The Dream
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Than you so much for your time today.
I am glad that you feel better now.
I am sure that you will be a great Mathematician.
Happy New Year. I hope that you will have a great holiday with your family.
See you on February 7. Take care.
Teacher Nina
I studied, talked to teacher Nina about color mix.
>> I studied, talked to teacher Nina about mixing colors.
We also practiced some words and ended our class.
>> CORRECT
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
5. What do you want to be when you grow up?
I want to be a Mathematician?
>> CORRECT (You should put period at the end of the sentence because it is a statement).
What are other answers to this question?
>> I want to teach Math to other people.
6. What do you want to be like that?
Because my favorite subject is math.
>> CORRECT
What are other answers to this question (about scientist) ?
>> I want to be a Scientist because my favorite subject is Science.
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