Homework For The Money
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time tonight.
I hope that you will have enough rest.
Thank you for sharing your ideas about Korean money.
I hope that you will share more in class.
Take care.
See you.
Teacher Nina
(S for six, N for Nine.)
I studied, talked to teacher Nina Korean money.
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It has N coins.
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We also practiced some words and ended our class.
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OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
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5. What do you need pocket money for?
It is for my living.
>> It is needed for me to live.
What are other answers to this question?
>> It is important for my everyday living.
>> OR: It is used to purchase my needs in school.
S. Who gives your pocket money?
My mom only.
>> CORRECT
What are other answers to this question?
>> My mom is the one who gives me pocket money.
>> OR: My grandmother gives me pocket money.
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