Homework For The Money

2019-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

(S for six, N for Nine.) I studied, talked to teacher Nina Korean money. It has N coins. We also practiced some words and ended our class. OK. Now, Answer the following questions. 5. What do you need pocket money for? It is for my living. What are other answers to this question? S. Who gives your pocket money? My mom only. What are other answers to this question?

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time tonight.

I hope that you will have enough rest.

Thank you for sharing your ideas about Korean money.

I hope that you will share more in class.

Take care.
See you.
Teacher Nina


(S for six, N for Nine.)

I studied, talked to teacher Nina Korean money.

>> CORRECT

It has N coins.

>> CORRECT

We also practiced some words and ended our class.
>> CORRECT
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
5. What do you need pocket money for?

It is for my living.
>> It is needed for me to live.
What are other answers to this question?

>> It is important for my everyday living.

>> OR: It is used to purchase my needs in school.

S. Who gives your pocket money?

My mom only.
>> CORRECT
What are other answers to this question?

>> My mom is the one who gives me pocket money.

>> OR: My grandmother gives me pocket money.

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