Homework For the Pets

2020-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

1. What would you do if you see a stray animal? I won\'t rescue them. 2. How would you ask your parents to adopt an animal for you? I will ask them, \"Can we have a pet?\" 3. How do you feel when you hear stories about animal cruelty? When I hear that story, then I feel angry and I will think they are bad people.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for making your homework tonight. Good job!

Until the next one! 

See you in class tomorrow! :)

~Teacher Sheila ^_^


I won\'t rescue them.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I won\'t do anything to them. 

I will ask them, \"Can we have a pet?\"
>>CORRECT

When I hear that story, then I feel angry and I will think they are bad people.
>>When I hear that story then I feel angry and I will think that they are bad people.

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