Homework For The Piggy bank
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What values can having a piggy bank teach you?
Having a piggy bank teaches us we should save money.
2. If you needed money badly, would you break your piggy bank?
I would break my piggy bank when I needed money badly.
3. If you had a piggy bank, what would you use the money you\'re earning for?
I will use the money when I need money badly like I need to buy my mother\'s birthday gift.
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Sheila
>>Having a piggy bank teaches us that we should save money.
OR>>Having a piggy bank teaches us to save money.
I would break my piggy bank when I needed money badly.
>>I would break my piggy bank when I need money badly.
I will use the money when I need money badly like I need to buy my mother\'s birthday gift.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I will use the money when I buy my mother\'s birthday gift.
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