Homework For The Run
학생이 쓴 원문
- What makes someone beautiful in your country? What differs between that idea and the American idea of beauty?
Risptics makes someone beautiful.
- Why is running good for our health?
Running makes us strong.
- How fast can you run?
I am not the fastest in my school, I\'m also not the slowest in my school.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you answering the questions truthfully. :D
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
Risptics makes someone beautiful.
>>Lipsticks make someone beautiful.
OR>>A lipstick makes someone beautiful.
Running makes us strong.
>>CORRECT
I am not the fastest in my school, I\'m also not the slowest in my school.
>>I m not the fastest in my school but I\'m also not the slowest in my school.
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