Homework For THe Skin
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you so much!
You did a great job in your homework.
Keep up the good work.
Thank you for making me happy.
Hope that you will have a great day tomorrow.
Teacher Nina
I show the result to teacher Nina. so she is sad. so I played B.R. 31.
>> I showed the result to Teacher Nina so she was sad, I played B.R. 31 with her.
So she is win and back to happy.
>> So she won and became happy.
and I studied \"Our skin\" part. and played find the words and practiced some words and exited our class.
>> I studied about part, played a game, finding the words, practiced some words and ended our class.
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
3. What is our skin for?
Our skin covers and protects us.
>> CORRECT
4. How do you take your of your skin?
I drink some water.
>> CORRECT
What are other answers to this question?
>> I drink eight glasses of water to keep my skin healthy.
>> OR: I drink water and eat healthy foods to keep my skin healthy.
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