Homework For The Stars
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Do you think stars are beautiful?
No, I don\'t think stars are beautiful.
2. Do you want to see stars when you look into the night sky?
No, I don\'t want to see stars.
3. When was the last time you gazed at the stars?
I saw stars when I come back to my home.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Thank you for answering it however it would also be great if you state the reasons why you don\'t like to see stars.
Until the next one! See you in class tomorrow! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
No, I don\'t want to see stars.
>>CORRECT
I saw stars when I come back to my home.
>>I saw stars when I came back home.
OR>>I saw stars when I was on my way home.
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