HOMEWORK FOR THE STUDENT: When do you prefer having a family gathering?
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR THE STUDENT: When do you prefer having a family gathering?
I prefer having a family gathering for New Year\'s Eve.
I\'d like to start new year happily with my family.
I often don\'t have a family gathering because they live another country from here.
So, I sometimes feel homesick and lonely.
But I\'ll live a bright life and have a strong life.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Olivia. Thank you for answering your homework. You did a wonderful job. Please take note of the corrections I made on your essay. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
I prefer having a family gathering for New Year\'s Eve.
>> Correct
I\'d like to start new year happily with my family.
>> I\'d like to start the new year happily with my family.
I often don\'t have a family gathering because they live another country from here.
>> I often can\'t have a family gathering because they live in another country.
So, I sometimes feel homesick and lonely.
>> Correct
But I\'ll live a bright life and have a strong life.
>> Correct
OR >> But I\'ll live brightly and lead a strong life.
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