Homework For The Summer
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Happy Monday, again.
Hope that you will have an awesome week ahead of you.
You did a wonderful job.
Keep it up!
I am excited to hear your ideas again in class.
See you.
Love,
Teacher Nina
1. Where do you want to go this summer?
I want to go to the swimming pool.
>>> correct
What are other answers to this question?
>>> I want to go to the water [이름] and swim.
>>> OR: I want to go to swimming in resorts.
2. Where else do you want to go?
I want to go to the cool mountain, too.
>>> correct
What are other answers to this question?
>>> I want to go to the mountain with cool atmosphere.
>>> OR: I want to go to the mountain and experience the cool breeze.
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