Homework For The Summer

2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Where do you want to go this summer? I want to go to the swimming pool. What are other answers to this question? 2. Where else do you want to go? I want to go to the cool mountain, too. What are other answers to this question?

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!
Happy Monday, again.

Hope that you will have an awesome week ahead of you.

You did a wonderful job.

Keep it up!
I am excited to hear your ideas again in class.
See you.


Love,

Teacher Nina


1. Where do you want to go this summer?

I want to go to the swimming pool.

>>> correct

What are other answers to this question?

>>> I want to go to the water [이름] and swim.

>>> OR: I want to go to swimming in resorts.

2. Where else do you want to go?

I want to go to the cool mountain, too.

>>> correct

What are other answers to this question?

>>> I want to go to the mountain with cool atmosphere.
>>> OR: I want to go to the mountain and experience the cool breeze.

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