Homework For The Sun

2018-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I studied and I singed to teacher Nina Christmas song. We also practiced some words and ended our class. OK. Now, Answer the following questions. 3. What is the sun like? The sun is like a big fireball. 4. Why is the sun important? Because it gives light to the world.

강사 첨삭

Good evening handsome [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time and for singing.
I felt energized after our class.
I also became more excited for the upcoming holiday.

I hope that you will have a great time tomorrow.
I appreciate that you did your homework.
See you and take care.

Teacher Nina

I studied and I singed to teacher Nina Christmas song.

>> I studied with Teacher Nina and sang some Christmas songs.

We also practiced some words and ended our class.
>> CORRECT
OK. Now, Answer the following questions.
>> CORRECT
3. What is the sun like?

The sun is like a big fireball.
>> CORRECT
4. Why is the sun important?

Because it gives light to the world.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: It is because it gives light to the world.

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