Homework For The Toys
학생이 쓴 원문
N. How do you feel about playing with toys?
I feel happy when I am doing that.
What are other answers to this question?
10. What kinds of toys have you played and what else would you like to play with?
I played with Lego, Toy cars, and robot.
What are other answers to this question?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! You made another homework tonight! Thank you for that. Maybe next time, provide different sentences as well or expand your answers by explaining. It will help you to improve your written communication skills.
Until the next one! :)
~Teacher Sheila
I feel happy when I am doing that.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I feel happy when I play with my toys.
I played with Lego, Toy cars, and robot.
>>I play with Legos, toy cars, and robots.
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