Homework For The Walk
학생이 쓴 원문
- What personality trait is the most important for inner beauty?
That makes you insider.
- What are the benefits and detriments of walking in the street?
That\'s good at exercise but we need to be careful at night.
- What do you observe from the people walking in your street?
I saw some people walking with dog but I didn\'t hear it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! The first question is asking about the importance of a person\'s personality.
Until the next one!
See you in class~ ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
That makes you insider.
>>That makes you an insider.
That\'s good at exercise but we need to be careful at night.
>>That\'s a good exercise but we need to be careful at night.
That\'s good at exercise but we need to be careful at night.
>>That\'s a good exercise but we need to be careful at night.
I saw some people walking with dog but I didn\'t hear it.
>>I saw some people walking with dogs but I didn\'t hear it.
OR>>I saw some people walking with a dog but I didn\'t hear it.
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