Homework For The Winter
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A wonderful evening to you [이름]!
Thank you for another fun filled class with you.
I really love it when you sing your chants.
I am so excited to hear the last chant that you are going to compose.
Please don\'t forget to go over the corrections below.
See you and have a great day.
Teacher Nina
1. What do you like doing during winter?
I\'m playing snowball fight in winter.
>> CORRECT
What are other answers to this question?
>> I enjoy playing snowball fight during winter.
2. Can you build a snowman by yourself?
No. Because Busan is less snowing.
>> No, it is because it doesn\'t snow that much here in Busan.
What are other answers to this question?
>> No, because it doesn\'t snow heavily here in Busan.
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