Homework for thursday-2

2012-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

9. I'm a teacher. I __have been__ a teacher for twelve years. was have been am am being 10. She can drive; she __has beeb able to__ drive for fifteen years. can is able to could has been able to Today is a happy day!!! I'm always thankful to everything in my life. I'm happy to read english novels and happy to excersize once in a day. I'm going to walk around the Children's grand park today unless it is rainy. Everytime I get your call, I become more adept at english conversation. 20 minutes goes to fast. It's because you lead our conversation very well. Sometimes your question makes me think a lot. And I love those kind of questions because of its deep meaning. I always expect our class. See you in class~~~

강사 첨삭

[이름]! Thank you so much for doing your homework. It really means a lot to me to see you improve in speaking English. I know that you are learning and I am grateful to be your teacher. I know you will succeed because you are very passionate. Thank you for your effort! You take care and I will see you soon. -----T. Sheela---- 9. I\'m a teacher. I __have been__ a teacher for twelve years. washave beenamam being >>>CORRECT!10. She can drive; she __has beeb able to__ drive for fifteen years. canis able tocouldhas been able to >>>CORRECT! >>>But be careful of the correct spelling for \'been\' and not \'beeb\' ^^ Today is a happy day!!! I\'m always thankful to everything in my life. >>>CORRECT!  I\'m happy to read english novels and happy to excersize once in a day. >>>I\'m happy to read English novels and happy to exercise once a day.  I\'m going to walk around the Children\'s grand park today unless it is rainy. >>> I\'m going to walk around the Children\'s grand park today unless it rains. >>>I\'m going to walk around the Children\'s grand park today unless it is a rainy day.  Everytime I get your call, I become more adept at english conversation. >>>Everytime I get your call, I become more adept to conversing in English. >>>I become more adept to conversing in English everytime I get your call. 20 minutes goes to fast. >>>Twenty minutes goes by too fast.  It\'s because you lead our conversation very well. >>>CORRECT!  Sometimes your question makes me think a lot. >>>CORRECT!  And I love those kind of questions because of its deep meaning. >>>CORRECT! I always expect our class. >>>I always look forward to our class. See you in class~~~ >>>CORRECT! OR>>See you in class!

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