Homework For Today^^

2012-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Q.Do you think that Korean women should also join the military? A. No,I don't think so. Because,if women are not do the housework and join the military,the women's young children can't do the housework like laundry and don't have food to eat. And most of women are weaker then the men,they can die easier then men. and women who have children will die,the women's children lost there mother(or be the orphan.) So,I don't think that Korean women(or other nation's women) should also join the military.

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Hi! Thanks for sending your 3rd homework for tonight. You gave me really interesting answers. ^^ Take care my dear and I will call you again soon! ~t.Karen Q.Do you think that Korean women should also join the military? A.    No. >> Correct! I don\'t think so. >> Correct! Because,if women are not do the housework and  join the military,the women\'s young children can\'t do the housework  like laundry and don\'t have food to eat. >> Because if women will not do the housework because they will join the military, their children can\'t do housework like laundry and so they will not have food to eat.  And most of women are weaker then the men,they can die easier then men. >> Most women are also weaker than men, and they die easier than men. and women who have children will die,the women\'s children lost there mother(or be the orphan.) >> If they die, their children will become orphans.  So,I don\'t think that Korean women(or other nation\'s women) should  also join the military. >> Correct!

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