Homework For Today
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Since you are suppose to celebrate your Independence day,
are you proud to be Korean? Why?
A. Yes,I proud of Korean, because many independentistas(like <Yoo Kwan Sun>)are
going to save our nation and notify to the other nation this sentence,
"Korea is our nation! Korea is not a Japan's nation!!". But the end of the
Korean is not success, but I'm very proud of many independentistas who tired
free from the Japan.
I think that independentistas are still shouting like this.
"Manseh Korea!! Manseh Korea!!
Free us from Japan!!"
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! . It\'s normal to be anxious since this is a new chapter in your life, but I know you will do great ^^. I am happy about your homework, (^___^). I am also happy that South Korea is an open country, thanks to Yoo Kwon Soon I was able to meet my students! Including you of course! (^___^) Have fun and keep safe this weekend okay?
~t.Karen >.<
Q. Since you are suppose to celebrate your Independence day,
are you proud to be Korean? Why?
A. Yes,I proud of Korean, because many independentistas(like <Yoo Kwan Sun>)are
going to save our nation and notify to the other nation this sentence,
\"Korea is our nation! Korea is not a Japan\'s nation!!\".
>> ** Please check on your sentence construction.
>> ** Don\'t forget to use \'AM\'.
>> ** Instead of \'independistas\', use the word \'national hero/heroes\'.
>> Yes I am proud to be a Korean, because many national heroes(like <Yoo Kwan Sun>)saved our nation and notified this sentence, \"Korea is our nation! Korea is not Japan\'s nation!!\" to the other nations.
But the end of the Korean is not success, but I\'m very proud of many independentistas who tired
free from the Japan.
>> ** Instead of \'independistas\', use the word \'national hero/heroes\'.
>> The ending was not really that much of a success, but I\'m very proud of our national heroes who tried to free us from Japan.
I think that independentistas are still shouting like this, \"Manseh Korea!! Manseh Korea!!
Free us from Japan!!\"
>> ** Instead of \'independistas\', use the word \'national hero/heroes\'.
>> I think that our national heroes are still shouting this, \"Manseh Korea!! Manseh Korea!!
Free us from Japan!!\"
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