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2012-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. Do you believe God? Why or why not? A. Yes or no. Because, me and my family believe God, but I think that God is not real. God is just at past, the people think "We have to believed and obey who is the most accurate person."And they believed God from that time. But I don't believed God anyway.. Because, I lean that earth is be born by crash!crash! many planets big bang. And earth is turn around it self, not from the God's help!! So, I believe God sometimes yes but sometimes not.

강사 첨삭

I totally respect what you believe in. I guess the most important thing is that we do good to other people and be an example to the young generation. Have a nice day. Later!   T. Karen   Q. Do you believe God? Why or why not?A. Yes or no. Because, me and my family believe God, >>Yes and no. Because me and my family believe in God,but I think that God is not real. God is just at past,>>but I think that God is not real. God is just from the past the people think \"We have to believed and obey>>that the people think that we have to believe and obey who is the most accurate person.\"And they believed God from that time.>>who is the most perfect person. And they believed in God during that time. But I don\'t believed God anyway.. Because, I lean that earth is >>But I don\'t believe in God anyway because I learned that Earth was be born by crash!crash! many planets big bang. And earth is >>formed from the big explosion called the Big Bang. And Earth revolved turn around it self, not from the God\'s help!!>>around and formed by itself and not with God\'s help! So, I believe God sometimes yes but sometimes not. >>So I believe in God sometimes yes but sometimes not.

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