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Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework! I really enjoyed your homework. It's very creative ^^ I agree with your answer, I do think that humans cannot live peacefully without lies. Anyway, please continue doing a good job and I will call you again really soon. Take care and have a very very nice weekend! (^___^)
~t.Karen >^.^<
No. Because, lies can make in to two group.
>> ** Combine your sentence together and consider sentence revision.
>> No I don't agree because there are two different kinds of lies.
One is white lie and one is big lie.
>> ** Consider sentence revision.
>> One is a white lie and the other is a big lie.
white lie is a lie but, it is a very good lie.
>> ** Don't forget your article 'A'.
>> ** Capitalize the first letter of your sentence.
>> A white lie is a lie but, it is a very good lie.
(for example)There are one grandmother and her daughter and her grandchild.
>> ** Use 'and' before the last word you are joining together.
>> There is one grandmother, her daughter and her grandchild.
One day, grandmother gave her grandchild a food what she make.
>> ** Don't forget your article 'the'.
>> ** Consider sentence revision.
>> One day, the grandmother gave her grandchild the food that she made.
But the grandchild dosen\'t like that food.
>> ** Use 'didn't' as it is a story in the past.
>> But the grandchild didn't like that food.
Then the phone rang.
>> Correct! ^^
It was grandmother.
>> ** Don't forget your article 'the'.
>> It was the grandmother.
The grandmother ask, \"Did you eat food that I make for you?\"
>> ** Turn your verbs into past tense because the story is in the past.
>> ** Use a punctuation mark to end your sentence.
>> The grandmother asked, \"Did you eat food that I made for you?\".
the grandchild said, \"Yes, I eat it aready.It was very delicious.Thanks
grandma!!\"
>> Correct! ^^
and grandmother anser, \"All right.I\'m happy to herd that you ate
food that I make.Well,good bye,my dear.\".
>> ** Don't forget your article 'the'.
>> and the grandmother anser, \"All right.I\'m happy to hear that you ate
food that I made.Well,good bye,my dear.\".
So grandchild hang off.
>> ** Don't forget your article 'the'.
>> ** Consider sentence revision.
>> So the grandchild hung up.
The grandchild\'s mother ask, \"Why do you tell grandma a lie?\" than grandchild
anser \"Because,I want to gave grandma some happiness.I don\'t want to gave
her hartborken.\"
>> ** Consider sentence revision.
>> ** Be careful with your spelling: 'answer' and 'then'.
>> The grandchild\'s mother ask, \"Why did you tell grandma a lie?\" then the grandchild
anwsered \"Because,I want to make grandma happy.I don\'t want to give
her a broken heart'.
So,And I think we have to becareful to not to tell a big lie, but sometime,we
can use white lie for not gave others hartbroken.
>> ** Consider sentence revision.
>> So I think we have to becareful to not to tell a big lie, but sometimes,we
can use white lies so others won't be heartbroken.
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