HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: Did you enjoy your childhood?
Yes! I enjoyed my childhood.
I\'m an onlychild. So when I was young, I usually played with my friends or cousins.
Also I liked to watch TV shows.
When I was young, there wasn\'t a smartphone. That\'s why I went out to meet my friends.
If I had a smartphone then, I would not play with my friends and make a precious memories.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]a! It sounds like you had a wonderful childhood, full of outdoor play and time spent with friends and family. It’s interesting to think about how different things might have been with smartphones back then.
-T. Sonny
Yes! I enjoyed my childhood.
>>Correct!
I\'m an onlychild.
I\'m an onlychild.
>>I\'m an only child.
So when I was young, I usually played with my friends or cousins.
>>Correct!
Also I liked to watch TV shows.
Also I liked to watch TV shows.
>> Correct!
OR. I also liked to watch TV shows.
When I was young, there wasn\'t a smartphone.
>>When I was young, there weren\'t smartphones
That\'s why I went out to meet my friends.
>>Correct!
If I had a smartphone then, I would not play with my friends and make a precious memories.
If I had a smartphone then, I would not play with my friends and make a precious memories.
>>If I had had a smartphone back then, I wouldn\'t have played with my friends or made those precious memories.
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