HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: How do you feel when you receive flowers from someone?
I\'m very happy when I received flowers.
I want to express my mood with other word but I can\'t think of anything except for \"happy\".
I got the flowers for my parents, friends at the graduation ceremony.
I felt that l did well in shcool and I appreciate to them. Also I promised to give flowers when they are graduated.
I saw the saying \"It\'s too hard to bloom for plant, so giving flower means that encouraging the difficulites and pains experienced to reach the goal.\"
I got a deep impress this saying.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]a! If you’re looking for other words to express your mood, you could try \"grateful,\" \"elated,\" \"touched,\" \"overjoyed,\" or \"moved.\" They can capture different aspects of that deep happiness and appreciation you felt.
-T Sonny
I\'m very happy when I received flowers.
>>I\'m very happy when I receive flowers.
I want to express my mood with other word but I can\'t think of anything except for \"happy\".
I want to express my mood with other word but I can\'t think of anything except for \"happy\".
>>I want to express my mood in other words, but I can\'t think of anything except \"happy.\"
I got the flowers for my parents, friends at the graduation ceremony.
I got the flowers for my parents, friends at the graduation ceremony.
>>I got flowers from my parents and friends at the graduation ceremony.
I felt that l did well in shcool and I appreciate to them.
I felt that l did well in shcool and I appreciate to them.
>>I felt that I had done well in school, and I appreciate them.
Also I promised to give flowers when they are graduated.
>>AI also promised to give them flowers when they graduate.
I saw the saying \"It\'s too hard to bloom for plant, so giving flower means that encouraging the difficulites and pains experienced to reach the goal.\"
>>I saw a saying: \"It\'s too hard to bloom for a plant, so giving flowers means encouraging the difficulties and pains experienced to reach the goal.\"
I got a deep impress this saying.
I got a deep impress this saying.
>>I was deeply impressed by this saying.
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