Homework for today
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: When do you drink coffee? Do you drink it at the same time every day?
I drink a cup of coffee when I should wake up. In particularly, late night before the test on next day or right after eating lunch.
I usually don\'t drink coffee at night, since I can\'t sleep well.
But in my father\'s case, he drinks coffee 2 or 3 times on a day.
He drinks it after having a meal.
I\'m worried about that but in the study, drinking some coffees is helpful for health.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]a! It sounds like you have good self-awareness and self-control. You\'re not overdoing it, and you’re making choices based on how you feel, which is a healthy approach. Plus, being aware of your father\'s habit and thinking about health shows you care not only about yourself but your family, too.
-T. Sonny
I drink a cup of coffee when I should wake up.
>>I drink a cup of coffee when I need to stay awake.
In particularly, late night before the test on next day or right after eating lunch.
>>I do it most especially late at night before a test the next day, or right after eating lunch.
I usually don\'t drink coffee at night, since I can\'t sleep well.
I usually don\'t drink coffee at night, since I can\'t sleep well.
>>I usually avoid drinking coffee at night, since it makes it hard for me to sleep.
But in my father\'s case, he drinks coffee 2 or 3 times on a day.
But in my father\'s case, he drinks coffee 2 or 3 times on a day.
>>But in my father\'s case, he drinks coffee two or three times a day.
He drinks it after having a meal.
He drinks it after having a meal.
>>He usually drinks it after meals.
I\'m worried about that but in the study, drinking some coffees is helpful for health.
I\'m worried about that but in the study, drinking some coffees is helpful for health.
>>I\'m a bit worried about that, but according to some studies, drinking a moderate amount of coffee can be good for your health.
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