Homework for today
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Writing task: What is your favorite dessert?
I like to eat dessert after a meal.
Especially, I love chocolate and anything with chocolate in it.
But I know that a milk chocolate isn\'t good at my healthy and I try to eat the kind of dark chocolate.
My friends almost know my favorite. So, they present me a dessert with chocolate.
Also my second favorite dessert is a bread.
A bread with chocolate is fantastic dessert to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]a! It sounds like you\'re a big fan of chocolatey treats! I\'m equally fond of bread and pastries. Dark chocolate is a great choice for satisfying your sweet tooth while being a bit healthier.
-T. Sonny
I like to eat dessert after a meal.
>>Correct!
Especially, I love chocolate and anything with chocolate in it.
Especially, I love chocolate and anything with chocolate in it.
>>Correct!
OR. I especially love chocolate and anything with chocolate in it.
But I know that a milk chocolate isn\'t good at my healthy and I try to eat the kind of dark chocolate.
But I know that a milk chocolate isn\'t good at my healthy and I try to eat the kind of dark chocolate.
>>However, I know that milk chocolate isn’t the best for my health, so I try to eat dark chocolate instead.
My friends almost know my favorite.
My friends almost know my favorite.
>>My friends know my favorite most of the time.
So, they present me a dessert with chocolate.
>>So, they would give me chocolate desserts as a present.
Also my second favorite dessert is a bread.
Also my second favorite dessert is a bread.
>>My second favorite dessert is bread.
A bread with chocolate is fantastic dessert to me.
A bread with chocolate is fantastic dessert to me.
>>Bread with chocolate is a fantastic dessert for me.
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