Homework for today
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Writing task: Is there something you regret buying? Why?
I have somethings to regret buying.
First of all, there are a clothes that I bought.
In the past, I bought the clothes if it has only one point to attract me.
But after I bought it, I didn\'t wear it often.
I thought that I waste a time, money and an environment.
So now, before I bought something, I carefully worried about it.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]a! Your experience is something many people can relate to. It’s easy to get excited about one appea[이름]g feature of a piece of clothing, only to realize later that it doesn’t really fit your style or needs.
-T. Sonny
I have somethings to regret buying.
>>There are some things I regret buying.
First of all, there are a clothes that I bought.
First of all, there are a clothes that I bought.
>>First of all, there are clothes that I’ve bought.
In the past, I bought the clothes if it has only one point to attract me.
In the past, I bought the clothes if it has only one point to attract me.
>>In the past, I would buy clothes just because they had one thing that attracted me.
But after I bought it, I didn\'t wear it often.
But after I bought it, I didn\'t wear it often.
>>But after buying them, I didn’t wear them often.
I thought that I waste a time, money and an environment.
>>I felt like I was wasting time, money, and even harming the environment.
So now, before I bought something, I carefully worried about it.
So now, before I bought something, I carefully worried about it.
>>So now, before I buy something, I think about it more carefully.
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