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2025-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sonny

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Writing task: What are the pet peeves you have about the people you know? I don\'t like rude people and i think rude is related with a sense. I don\'t want to get involved with person who is without a common sense. For example, a person who cuts in [이름]e or who is chewing loudly. If close acquaintance did like that, I will say that \"Don\'t do that. Doing like that is very rude and Irrational behavior.\" But we don\'t know each other, I just ignore and I won\'t treat them well.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]a! I really like your honesty. You’re clearly someone who values basic respect and social awareness, and I get that 100%. It’s frustrating when people lack common courtesy. It also shows you care about fairness and how people treat each other in everyday life. That’s something that matters more than people often admit.

-T. Sonny

I don\'t like rude people and i think rude is related with a sense.

>>I don’t like rude people, and I think rudeness is related to common sense.
I don\'t want to get involved with person who is without a common sense.

>>I don’t want to get involved with someone who lacks common sense.
For example, a person who cuts in [이름]e or who is chewing loudly.

>>For example, a person who cuts in [이름]e or chews loudly.
If close acquaintance did like that, I will say that \"Don\'t do that. Doing like that is very rude and Irrational behavior.\"

>>If a close acquaintance did that, I would say, “Don’t do that. Doing that is very rude and irrational behavior.”

But we don\'t know each other, I just ignore and I won\'t treat them well.

>>But if we don’t know each other, I just ignore them and won’t treat them well.

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