HOMEWORK FOR TODAY

2012-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

학생이 쓴 원문

My teacher, Good day! Usually around this time, my daily job is done. So I'm surfing the web and just checking your comment about our telephone-lecture. Thanks a lot! As I told you today, I'm planning to go abroad for language training next year. So From now on, I would like to have talk about my interest frequently with you. Meanwhile, as per today's homework, my answers are as below ; > 1) has, would buy 2) ?? 3) ?? 4) arrives / will be 5) come / will bring HOMEWORK 1) If Peter ________(have) more money, he _______ (buy) a new car. 2) What ________(you do) if you _______(see) an accident? 3) Where ________ (you live) if you ______(have) a choice? 4) If Caroline ____(arrive) late for a meeting, her boss _________(be) angry. 5) If his parents _______(come) to visit him, John ________(bring) them to the theatre. But I don't know answer about Q2 and Q3, so I need your comments about there. See you tomorrow ~ Take Care!!

강사 첨삭

Hey there! I really appreciate you for your time in doing your homework and sharing your thoughts. You still need though to work on your conditional sentences. And I would suggest to copy first the questions and answer it afterwards to avoid any confusion. ^_^ I hope you will have a successful language training next year. I \'m wishing you good luck as early as now. You have a good one! T. Kelly ^_^ Here are my corrections for you: My teacher, Good day! >> My teacher, good day! >> OR >> My teacher, I hope you have a good day!Usually around this time, my daily job is done. >> Correct >> OR >> Usually around this time, my daily routine is done.So I\'m surfing the web and just checking your comment about our telephone-lecture. >> Correct >> So, I\'m just surfing the web and just checking your comment about our telephone lecture.Thanks a lot!>> CorrectAs I told you today, I\'m planning to go abroad for language training next year. >> As I have told you today, I\'m planning to go abroad for language training next year.So From now on, I would like to have talk about my interest frequently with you. >> So from now on, I would like to have a talk about my interest with you.Meanwhile, as per today\'s homework, my answers are as below ;> 1) has, would buy >> had - would buy2) ?? >> would you do - saw3) ?? >> would you live - had4) arrives / will be >> arrived - would be5) come / will bring >> came - would bring HOMEWORK 1) If Peter ________(have) more money, he _______ (buy) a new car.2) What ________(you do) if you _______(see) an accident?3) Where ________ (you live) if you ______(have) a choice?4) If Caroline ____(arrive) late for a meeting, her boss _________(be) angry.5) If his parents _______(come) to visit him, John ________(bring) them to the theatre.But I don\'t know answer about Q2 and Q3, so I need your comments about there. >> But I don\'t know the answer for Questions 1 and 2, so I need your comments in there.See you tomorrow ~ Take Care!! >> See you tomorrow. Take Care!

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