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2012-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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I think that when house change into a home,it need two things. 1. It needs happy family- Home is a place where people lives, so it needs a happy family. 2. It needs family's love- Most people in the wolrd are have their family. But when family got a fight so there feelings are not very good, there home's can't be happy all day.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you again for your time today. :) WOW! This has been the smartest answer I got! You are right. A house can never be home without a happy family. It is very inspiring, isn\'t it? Anyway, I hope you have learned from me even though we only spent a short time together. Happy trip [이름]! Hope to see you soon! Enthusiastically, ~Teacher Alice I think that when house change into a home,it need two things. >> I think that when a house changes into a home, it needs two things:1. It needs happy family- Home is a place where people lives, so it needs a happy family. >> It needs a happy family. Home is a place where people live, so it needs a happy family.2. It needs family\'s love- Most people in the wolrd are have their family. But when family got a fight so there feelings are not very good, there home\'s can\'t be happy all day. >> It needs family\'s love- Most people in the world have their own families. But when the family has a fight or problem, they would feel bad towards one anotheer. Hence, their home\'s can\'t be happy all day.

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