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My company is the after service of automobil. I majored automobil in university. but I am not a mechanic. I am a office worker. Now I manage the Parts of car which need to repaire when broke down cars. I hope to get a new job. I want to work at trade company that impotor foreign car especially germany brand. Germany brand's cars are the best car in the world. I would like to learn their high technology. Also It will be very enjoy to make foreigner friends and coworkers. I can learn their culture and go to their country for business. in order to do My dream realize I must learn english very hard. Althouht it is difficult to learn english I will try to do.

Hi! Thank you for your composition. Great ideas! You were able to express your thoughts well. I enjoyed reading it. I hope that you will have a great week a head of you. Don\'t give up in learning English. I am here for you,I will help you.Take Care! T.Kristel Here are my corrections for you: My company is the after service of automobil. >>My company\'s services is about automobile. OR >>My company is where you can find the solutions about your automobiles.I majored automobil in university. >>My major was automobile when I studied in my university.but I am not a mechanic. I am a office worker. >>But I am not a mechanic. I am an office worker. OR >>I am not a mechanic, I work in the office.Now I manage the Parts of car which need to repaire when broke down cars. >>Now I manage the parts of the car which needs to be repaired when a car broke down. OR >>I manage the parts that is needed to be bought or to be repaired when a car broke down.I hope to get a new job. >>Correct!I want to work at trade company that impotor foreign car especially germany brand. >>I want to work in a trading company that imports foreign cars especially the brand of Germany.Germany brand\'s cars are the best car in the world. >>The cars that are from Germany are the best cars in the world.I would like to learn their high technology. >>I would like to learn about their technology.Also It will be very enjoy to make foreigner friends and coworkers. >>Also It is enjoyable to make foreigner friends and co-workers.I can learn their culture and go to their country for business. >>I can learn their culture and visit their country for a business.in order to do My dream realize I must learn english very hard. >>In order to reach my dreams I should study hard to speak in English.Althouht it is difficult to learn english I will try to do. >>Eventhough it is difficult to learn English I will try my best.