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Next year is tenth year since I've been marride. We went to Pattaya for honeymoon. Pattaya was very beautiful island. We sightseed famose temples, beach, and parks Their traditional dance was fantastic. But I didn't like their foods except see foods because of the smell of the spice. We were satisfide with our first travel. It was enjoyable and very exciting. We promissed it that visit Pattaya again someday. At first plan, we visit there when got marride in 10 years. But I and my wife are busy each other what is wrong my children are young yet. Unfortunately we must correct our plan. 1. do your extended family members come to your house sometimes? Yes they do. My father and father-in-low often visit my house. sometimes we have family gathering at my house. example birthday. a national holiday. 2. at your place, who manages the house? My wife manages the house. She is a housewife and I work for money I'm always tired because I have a lot of work at my company

Hello there! Wow! Your wedding anniversary is already nearing. I am very happy for you and for your wife. I\'m just a bit sad that you won\'t be able to push through your plans. However, I think you really should consider your children. Maybe you can travel to a nearer place instead. Anyway, please go over the corrections and feel free to ask me some questions if you have. See you! P.S. Be careful with your spellings.^^ -T. Kristel- Next year is tenth year since I\'ve been marride. >> Next year is the tenth year since I\'ve been married.  We went to Pattaya for honeymoon. >> Correct.  Pattaya was very beautiful island. >> Pattaya is a very beautiful island.  We sightseed famose temples, beach, and parks >> We visited famous temples, beaches, and parks. Their traditional dance was fantastic. >> Their traditional dance is fantastic.  But I didn\'t like their foods except see foods because of the smell of the spice. >> Correct.  We were satisfide with our first travel. >> We were satisfied with our first travel.  It was enjoyable and very exciting. >> Correct.  We promissed it that visit Pattaya again someday. >> We promised to visit here again someday.  At first plan, we visit there when got marride in 10 years. >> Our first plan was to go back there on our 10th wedding anniversary.  But I and my wife are busy each other what is wrong my children are young yet. >> However, my wife and I are busy and our children are still young.  Unfortunately we must correct our plan. >> And so we have to make revisions on our plans.  1. do your extended family members come to your house sometimes?  Yes they do. My father and father-in-low often visit my house.  sometimes we have family gathering at my house.  example birthday. a national holiday. >> Yes, they do. My father and my father-in-law often visit my house.  sometimes we have family gathering at my house. >> Sometimes, we have family gathering at my house. >> We, sometimes, have family gathering at my house.  example birthday. a national holiday. >> We gather during birthdays or national holidays.  2. at your place, who manages the house?  My wife manages the house. >> Correct.  She is a housewife and I work for money >> She does the managing because she stays more often at home since I have to go to work.  I\'m always tired because I have a lot of work at my company >> Correct. Just put a period at the end of the sentence. >> I\'m always tired because I have a lot of work at my company.