Homework for today

2012-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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There are five members in my family. My wife , first daughter , second son , third son and me. My wife is the same age me. She is a friend of a wife. She always serve and take care of her familys. First daughter is very cute and a lovely girl. She is always crying so her nickname is a crybaby. Second son is a urchin. He likes to play with toys. He likes to watch animation program. Third son looks seem resemble me. He likes to eat sweet foods With my family I 'm able to be happy. They are a jewel of a person and they mean the world to me.

강사 첨삭

Your family sounds really lovely. You truly are blessed with such wonderful members in your family. I\'m really happy to read about them. Thanks a lot     for sharing those with me. :) T. Kristel There are five members in my family. >>Correct!My wife , first daughter , second son , third son and me. >>My wife, a daughter, two sons and me.My wife is the same age me. >>Correct! She is a friend of a wife. >>She is my friend too.She always serve and take care of her familys. >>She always serves and takes care of our family.First daughter is very cute and a lovely girl. >>My daughter is very cute and lovely.She is always crying so her nickname is a crybaby. >>Correct!Second son is a urchin. >>My eldest son is an urchin.  He likes to play with toys. >>Correct!He likes to watch animation program. >>He likes to watch animation programs.Third son looks seem resemble me. >>My youngest son resembles me.He likes to eat sweet foods >>Correct! (But don\'t forget your punctuation mark.)With my family I \'m able to be happy. >>Because of my family, I\'m happy.They are a jewel of a person and they mean the world to me. >>They are my jewels and they mean the world to me.

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