Homework for today

2012-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

We'd batter eat comfortable food for stomach in the morning. I thick Rice is the best food for beakfast. There's old saying " Korean must eat rice" That mean is a meal suitable for Korean. Our body need much energy for activity. Rice is nutriment enough for our body. It's the good way that with fresh vegetables else.

강사 첨삭

 \'Everything you want is out there waiting for you to ask. Everything you want also wants you. But you have to take action to get it.\' ~ Jules Renard I appreciate your effort in writing this composition so just keep it up and learn from your mistakes. Take care and talk to you soon then. Teacher Kristel Here are my corrections for you: We\'d batter eat comfortable food for stomach in the morning. >> We\'d better eat comfort food for our stomach in the morning.I thick Rice is the best food for beakfast. >> I think rice is the best food for breakfast.There\'s old saying \" Korean must eat rice\" >> There\'s an old saying and I quote, \"Koreans must eat rice.\"That mean is a meal suitable for Korean. >> That means it\'s a suitable meal for Koreans.Our body need much energy for activity. >> Our body needs much energy for our daily activities.Rice is nutriment enough for our body. >> Rice is nutritious enough for our body.It\'s the good way that with fresh vegetables else. >> It\'s also a good choice to match rice with fresh vegetables.

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