Homework for today

2012-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I'm very happy today because Today is my birthday and There's a birthday party at my house tonight. I'm thinking about what we will do. 2. I feel frustrated when failed the exam of promotion. 3.I feel like drinkig when My favorite baseball team win the game. 4. I want to travel in singapore because I'd like to see Kristel. 5. I am regertful about I didn't study hard english. I'd have studide hard in university.

강사 첨삭

Hello there.^^Happy birthday!Am I invited in your birthday party?I am just kidding, but you may take my statement seriously if you want to.^^Anyway, I am so glad that you were able to express yourself using the English language very well.You just have to be very careful in constructing your sentences, like I always say.Have a great day!Again, happy birthday!_T.Kristel^^1. I\'m very happy today because Today is my birthday and There\'s a birthday party at my house tonight.>> I am very happy today because today is my birthday and there is a birthday party at my house tonight.I\'m thinking about what we will do.>> Correct2. I feel frustrated when failed the exam of promotion.>> I feel frustrated when I failed the exam for my promotion.3.I feel like drinkig when My favorite baseball team win the game.>> I feel like drinking when my favorite baseball team wins the game.4. I want to travel in singapore because I\'d like to see Kristel.>> I want to travel to Singapore because I\'d like to see Kristel.5. I am regertful about I didn\'t study hard english. I\'d have studide hard in university. >> I regret not studying English so hard. I should have studied hard in the university.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·