Homework for today

2012-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

I think that sleep is the best way to relax. There is an old saying " Sleep is restorative" in Korea. Sleep is good mentally and physically. We sleep as so to improve ourbody. Also, It can get rid of stress by sleep. Therefore, I take a nap during lunch time on weekdays.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]~~~ Happy Wednesday, again..^^ Thank you very much for always doing your homework! Anyway, I really appreciate your effort trying to use different expressions in your sentences.^^ Those are really good! Just be more careful with your grammar next time. Anyway, have a nice day and have a good and sweet later during your nap..kkk T.Kristel I think that sleep is the best way to relax. >>CORRECT!!There is an old saying \" Sleep is restorative\" in Korea. >>CORRECT!!Sleep is good mentally and physically. >>Sleep is good mentally and physically.We sleep as so to improve ourbody. >>We sleep so as to improve our body.Also, It can get rid of stress by sleep. >>Also, I can get rid of stress by sleeping.Therefore, I take a nap during lunch time on weekdays. >>CORRECT!!  

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