Homework for today
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that sleep is the best way to relax.
There is an old saying " Sleep is restorative" in Korea.
Sleep is good mentally and physically.
We sleep as so to improve ourbody.
Also, It can get rid of stress by sleep.
Therefore, I take a nap during lunch time on weekdays.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]~~~
Happy Wednesday, again..^^
Thank you very much for always doing your homework!
Anyway, I really appreciate your effort trying to use different expressions in your sentences.^^
Those are really good! Just be more careful with your grammar next time.
Anyway, have a nice day and have a good and sweet later during your nap..kkk
T.Kristel
I think that sleep is the best way to relax.
>>CORRECT!!There is an old saying \" Sleep is restorative\" in Korea.
>>CORRECT!!Sleep is good mentally and physically.
>>Sleep is good mentally and physically.We sleep as so to improve ourbody.
>>We sleep so as to improve our body.Also, It can get rid of stress by sleep.
>>Also, I can get rid of stress by sleeping.Therefore, I take a nap during lunch time on weekdays. >>CORRECT!!
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