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2012-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

Old pictures that I was taken when I was chidhood remind me. There's the pictures at my parents' house Sometimes I look up the pictures when I visit my parents' house. On a second thought, I was a urchin. Else, it reminds me the gathering of elementary school. We have meeting twice a year. There were much things when we were in elementary school. We talk about happened things in those days.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thanks for sharing these memory with me. I hope I could also see those pictures to see how you were before..kkK Anyway, keep those good memories in your heart and always be thanksful of those. Have a nice day! See you in class.. T.Kristel Old pictures that I was taken when I was chidhood remind me. >>Old pictures that were taken during my childhood reminds me of the past.There\'s the pictures at my parents\' house >>There are pictures at my parents\' house.Sometimes I look up the pictures when I visit my parents\' house. >>CORRECT!!On a second thought, I was a urchin. >>On the second thought, I was an urchin.Else, it reminds me the gathering of elementary school. >>Moreover, it reminds me of the gathering in the elementary school.We have meeting twice a year.>>CORRECT!! but you can use the vocabulary reunionThere were much things when we were in elementary school. >>There were many things when we were in the elementary,We talk about happened things in those days. >>We talk about things that happened on those days.  

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