Homework for today

2012-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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It is reason that People go to work late because of some problem. For example, I go to see a doctor when I and one of my familys get a sick. There are a lot of traffic jam at street on the way go to work. Worker worked overtime late yesterday so he is so tired.

강사 첨삭


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Thank you for doing your homework.

Please go over the following corrections, okay?

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_T.Kristel^^

It is reason that People go to work late because of some problem.

>> The reason why people go to work late is because they have some problems.
For example, I go to see a doctor when I and one of my familys get a sick.

>> For example, I see a doctor when me and one member of my family get sick.
There are a lot of traffic jam at street on the way go to work.

>> There are a lot of traffic jams on my work to work.
Worker worked overtime late yesterday so he is so tired.

>> A certain worker worked overtime yesterday so he is so tired now.

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